Prior to my critique I has really happy with my website design as I felt I had converted by immersive prototype design to a website quite well with only a few minor changes with typography to help further enhance the look and feel. I also really liked how it had turned out and had further enhanced my skills on Framer as it is a tool many find difficult but is really useful to be able to use.
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My website was liked a lot by Kyle and my classmates as I was only one of four people who chose this route. Kyle said it was a very solid website with good transitions and he really liked my use of typography and imagery as it really helped each section to stand out and help tell the story of Apollo 11. Some of the minor changes I could make to further enhance it would be adding “By Rebekah Leonard” below the title to make it more personalised and draw people in as it is a student project, increasing my body text slightly as Kyle said it looked a little bit small, adding a button at the bottom that takes you back to the top and lastly adding a carousel of images behind the title!
<aside> 💭 I am extremely happy with this feedback as it really reflects the hard work I have put into further developing my Framer skills but also it reflecting my initial art direction and being a piece I am really proud of!
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